راه‌حل باید به خودِ مشکل جواب بدهد

«اطلاع‌رسانی باید بهتر شود» یک آرزوست، نه هنوز یک راه‌حل. دقیقاً چه چیزی عوض شود و از کجا بفهمیم کمک کرده؟ موقعیتِ کالج خیالی است؛ اینجا ساختارِ نوشتن را تمرین می‌کنید، نه گزارش یک نتیجهٔ واقعی را.

نمونه

At this college, students sometimes arrive at the old classroom because room changes are announced on several different boards. I would make one online timetable the main source for changes. When a room is updated, the timetable should show the new number clearly and send students a short notification. Staff could still put a paper note on the old door for anyone without immediate internet access. After a month, the college could ask students how often they went to the wrong room and compare their answers with the previous month. This would not solve every late arrival: students also need to check messages. But one reliable place for updates would make the information easier to find.

روش سنجش به خودِ مشکل مربوط است: کمتر رفتن به اتاق اشتباه، نه معیار مبهمی مثل «راضی بودن».